PostsCommentssaltycat in # • 3 days agoRE: obligationsYou have a strong central theme of togetherness which is strenghtned by the reptition of we. Highlighting as it does shared responsibility and mutual support, well donesaltycat in # • 19 days agoRE: see the lightsyour poem shows real emotional depth here with a very reassuring tone. There are several lines I liked in particular - "letting t slide into the valley" and "driving into the…
