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RE: Making Snow Angels, Pt. 2 of 2

in #curie7 years ago

Just like the movies, the lead detective flicks his cigarette symbolizing how un-rare this is for him.

Dunno but I really like this line. :) It is so classic haha.

It might all seem long if you dared to scroll all the way down first but the parts a structured well and keep the story flowing to move into the ending which is wonderfully climatic yet serene and relatable.

Can't say much more I liked the story and although it seemed fragmented it works, given my thoughts are anyway fragmented and it still comes together :) !tip 0.2

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Yeah, haha. I was afraid people would be scared away by the length of it. For many people, that's an immediate scroll. Glad you liked it, man!