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RE: A Finishthestory Short Story: The Extraordinary Café

in #finishthestory • 7 years ago

Good emotional story. You packed a lot into that ending. I feel for the guy who can't get over his lost love. I'm glad the Uncle intervened with some sound advice. You ended it with the hope that he is now able to move on, he just needed his eyes opened. And I'm sure that tasty brownie helped!

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         7 years ago 

        I think- like myself- you liked @theironfelix brownies more than anything else. He makes me want them so much.
        Thank You.

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               7 years ago 

              Yes, he did a little too good of a job describing how they smelled - nothing smells better than fresh baked brownies!

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