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RE: The Final Journey: Finish the Story Conest #50

in #finishthestory7 years ago

nice ending. last train home is always a good trope. I liked how you made the old man a more comforting visitor, just like death can be comforting once people accept it.

welcome to the finish the story community! congrats on a curie vote!

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Thank you. I do feel welcome, with these great comments...and a curie!