It was a simple story and you explain that it has a kind of structure that I think came naturally to me. Thank you for your analysis. I haven't read you story yet, but I will today.
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We all are biased creatures, but we definitely can use our biases fairly well to create unique stuff. What was simple to you was quite masterful in that was natural to you even when you were unconscious of why. So always use every story to study upon what you had done, see what could be improved upon, modify strategies and use that in the assistance of the next story. But that is just me and how I managed to scrape by just fine by now - you will find your own way to fight for the top!~
Thanks for sharing the story yet again and here, here, to seeing yah around on my entry now!~