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RE: Mizu No Oto - Every Image Has Its Haiku - Edition #27 (English)

in #haikucontest7 years ago

Sinking beneath
A single chain holds on -
Winter lets go

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All the three haiku are beautiful, but after a lot of thinking, I want to consider this first one for the contest. Beyond the deeper meaning of the third, this one sounds better to me.