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RE: Jane's dream / El sueño de jane

in Writing Club3 years ago

An amazing story that conveys how a parent should always pay attention what their children say. All children have gifts but it just we adults underestimate the power of their young mind. I wish Jane was able to save her mother. That was painful..

Well done! I enjoyed reading your story. Stay soild!

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Thank you so much @esther-emmanuel, I am happy to have you here and just has you have said, paying attention to our children's is awesome, Jane's mother didn't took Jane's dreams seriously, if really she knew, leaving the house with Jane or throwing away the Terminator Rubber Motor Should have been a good option.