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RE: A portal! Micro-fiction writing contest.

in #microfiction6 years ago

This story really made me smile, @felixgarciap! Also, you are doing great with your storylines. You’ve been adding a conflict that must be resolved by the end of the story, which is a critical element for good fiction. Well done.

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Thank you very much @jayna for your funny review. This encourages me to continue to extrude my brain to achieve good stories. Receive my affections. LOL