You've got another good episode, @zentalk. It increases the intrigue, the tension over Albright's mission. Your description of the spaces and secondary participants of the story allow to visualize the atmosphere of this ruinous place, mixture of city of the future with decadence and repulsion. The passing scenes on the street food are a pathetic demonstration of that nauseating world. In addition, I think devices or technological elements are well incorporated. Pending the new installment of your science fiction story. Greetings.
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