Hello, @immanuel94!
Thank you for your contribution. This is a cool game, and it's great to see all the development being made. Your review is very informative and well-illustrated with relevant images. Keep up the good work.
On the content side, I like all the information provided. You went into detail about the newly added features, and I think that the post contains all the necessary information. However, it lacks editorial content. I wanted to read more about your personal knowledge, views and experience of working on this project. Regardless, it was a solid overall effort, and I enjoyed reading your work.
That said, the post did have issues of style and proofreading, but not to the level where it hurt the reading experience. To sum up, this is a nice contribution from you, and I look forward to your next one.
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