RE: BinaryEye- Create, Recreate and Scan Barcodes/QrCodes.

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lordneroo in #utopian-io • 7 years ago

Thank you for this contribution.

Your review is interesting, and the same can be said about this project. The post contains useful information about the application, and I am sure that users looking to get started with this tool will be thoroughly satisfied with the information provided in this post.

In terms of content, you did a really good job. The post is extensive and editorial, and includes valuable information about your personal knowledge, views and experience of using the application. I also enjoyed reading about the upcoming version, and it goes without saying that I appreciate the effort you put into your work.

That said, the writing of this post was not good enough, I'm afraid. There were serious issues of grammar and style, making your text difficult to comprehend at times. I would be happy to provide a few examples in a follow-up comment, if you wish.

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7 years ago in #utopian-io by lordneroo

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rufans 7 years ago (edited)

Thank you for the review. Kindly cite me with the mistakes.

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lordneroo 7 years ago (edited)

Hello!

I will cite a few examples for you:

When I was younger, I have seen many physical products with series of lines and spaces on them.

This is a bad sentence, as there is no need to use Present Perfect here. This tense is used to indicate a link between the present and the past, and particularly in cases where we are more interested in the result than in the action itself.

This sentence should read: "When I was younger, I remember seeing many physical products with series of lines and spaces on them."

Many months later, after severally questions of what those lines and spaces are, I was told it's a Barcode, and the device I saw on the television was its scanner.

I've said it before and I'll say it again: long sentences make the text hard to read. It is hard to communicate your message effectively to the reader in a lengthy sentence without careful crafting.

This sentence should read: "Many months later, after several questions about those lines and spaces, I was told it was a Barcode, and the device I had seen on television was its scanner."

The paragraph above simply means, BinaryEye lacks the ability to open other types of contents

This would be a better sentence: "The paragraph above simply means that BinaryEye lacks the ability to load/process other types of content"

I hope you will find this comment useful.

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rufans 7 years ago

Very useful. Thanks

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utopian-io 7 years ago

Thank you for your review, @lordneroo! Keep up the good work!

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