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RE: Finish the Story - Week #51/The Devisal of Mr. Dankworth - @bananafish

in #finishthestory7 years ago

I like the mood...maybe it has something to do with the weed :) You create an atmosphere. The part about the cat really fixes the scene, places us there with Dankworth. Everything is so laid back, real.
Good story, pleasant read. I actually find myself wishing this guy good luck.