Love your rendition Bro.
P.S; In the music zone community you're expected to present your song with an instrument however, if someone is playing the instrument for you, you should include them as well in the video as the community rules implies.
Secondly, some of your tags weren't necessary, #hmf and #music should be your first tags before any other tags in this particular community and #blocktrades, #bdvoter and #ocdb are whales and shouldn't be used for tags.
Please take this into consideration from your subsequent entries. You can as well add few lyrics of your song to carry your audience along..