well Hello!!
You do know you are a better writer then you know. Just write like you talk. Stop thinking about what it might look like when someone reads it. Practice is the key.
and you don't have to talk about yourself. You can make the things you saw the focus of the post.
Why ride a bike? how does it make you feel? what is the best thing about naps?
How to pack a bike for a long trip.
best rain gear to have when riding a bike.
why Do bikers wear leather? just to look cool? Why do bikers have patches? are they sewn on by hand?
Lot's of things to try that you know but not about you :D
Oh, and LOVED this post!!!! Congrats on the followthrough!!!
Nice Bike :D