RE: Seeking to organize your thoughts in a Diary? Use Easy Diary [part 1]

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tykee in #utopian-io • 7 years ago (edited)

Hi Harry, and thank you for your contribution. This post is quite extensive, well-structured and informative.
The project looks attractive. I like the app UI and the dairy search feature. I might consider it.

On the content side, you did great. You provided some in-depth details, including your experiences and thought. However, excessive and wordy texts make reading a little bit hard. Especially, the repetition of similar words.

Lastly, the post had grammar issues. There are omissions, punctuation and incomplete sentences. I'll cite a few examples.

The journal isn't meant only for my reflections though, it

You joined two independent clauses with a comma. The right punctuation should be ;it -,and it or a period. Also, talking about clear writing, your texts contain some long-winded sentences.

I ~~obviously~~ don't want to look insane in the sight of other people.

I don't want to look insane in the sight of other people. Sounds better. If you want your readers to enjoy your publication, make it easy for them.

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7 years ago in #utopian-io by tykee

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harry-heightz 7 years ago

Thanks for your review @tykee. However, I'm quite concerned about two answers from the questionnaire.
Firstly, you said this post was created with information gathered from other sources which is very wrong. I don't think there's any other article about this software than this one I've written.
The other part of the content which discussed a general issue, I really didn't say much and I cited the article in my post. Furthermore, you said I did a comparison in this post when actually I didn't. I only reviewed the latest features of the app. I think the correct answer there should be something about recent events 2 weeks or something like that.
I'd love to hear back from you.

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tykee 7 years ago

The last answer I picked was a mistake. I guess my PC caused that, and I will fix it asap. The right answer should be 'None of these topics are discussed in the post.' I don't think there is anywhere you specified, that you are reviewing the latest features in the app. The post looks like a general app review.

I believe you are aware of the issues with the questionnaire. The category CM has created a better set of questions/answers which will manage this - 'How familiar is the author with the project discussed in the post?'

I do not think the content deserves to be scored as 'The author offers some valuable insights about the project.' We'll have the new questionnaire in a couple of days, and there won't be issues like these again.

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harry-heightz 7 years ago (edited)

I didn't know I had to explicitly say I was reviewing the latest version of the software. The new version of the app saw some new features added and I talked about them in my review.

Check these points

Diary postcard
Export to excel

Please check again @tykee

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utopian-io 7 years ago

Thank you for your review, @tykee! Keep up the good work!

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