see the lights

in Blockchain Poets3 days ago

I know your minds are full of doubts
I was in that path once
but right now I am letting it slide
into the valley
where it will not be seen to cover the heart
we will see good things everyday
not about fear and dislike
you just do not know I understand
but this is the perfect time for you to know
come with me and you will see
just stand with me and you will see
I do not want you to ever missed this
I still understand when the time comes you will feel
but i want you to start can decide it right now
I know all these things because I have been there
I have make mistakes and i have corrected myself
that is why i am guiding you to make what is best
I am just afraid of how you will behave
when the result is out
I just do not want you to ever get sad
and not to ever missed your steps with the guards
but to be the best of yourself.

You will understand when the time comes
what i have done for you
but i still reason how you will react when you know this
remember to take it kindly when you get this
because it's just about time.

But always don't let your thoughts fly
package yourself like bread and butter
on this phase I am not talking about the recipe
but the connection between the two
about courage and forecast
be seeing the possibility even in far places
keeping a watch for all the helpful activities
which can help to get another solution in the future
continue staring at each step's and believed in the journey
driving into the lane that will get to the house
never be afraid of the journey
but to pray and wish for good always.

This poem is a reminder that, it is never too late, and is it never too far, but by letting us know that, what ever we want is just right there at the corner of our house, or beside ourself, if we can just open up our thoughts to see what is good.

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your poem shows real emotional depth here with a very reassuring tone. There are several lines I liked in particular - "letting t slide into the valley" and "driving into the lane.... Whereas "bread and butter" could have been expanded upon I feel. In total it felt very heartfelt, as usual from you.

@saltycat, you do not know how happy it makes me feel hearing those insightful comment from you.

I do everything I can each day, and I tried to put out those words together, to atleast, bring and sent good energy to each of us.

Therefore, looking more into it, your comment makes me see that i am doing something good, just by hearing those great words from you.

You have done awesome. Have a wonderful day ahead, friend.

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